Post by toledo on Oct 18, 2012 13:12:59 GMT
thanks for adding this - I find it very handy, and like the way you have broken it up too, but could I suggest a few tweaks to how the data appears?
Deaths - if possible, I think it would be nice to have something like;
House [HOUSE NAME] regret the passing of [TITLE(s) AT DEATH] [FIRST NAME] [ HOUSE NAME] at the Age of [AGE] <(of Natural Causes/by Trial of Arms/in combat/in suspect circumstance)> at/on board [ESTATE NAME/SHIP NAME where dies]
<Where no reason to think foul play (including if the family do not realise it was an assassination)/Personal Combat/Assasinated>
so Darius Shirazi would be
House Shirazi regret the passing to Baron Darius Shirazi at the age of 40(?) in suspect circumstance at Estate Shiraz
Coming of Age
Think this could be presented as something like;
House [HOUSE NAME] are pleased present [FIRST NAME] upon <his/her> coming of age!
and a couple of different lines
- When a character is made Major
House [HOUSE NAME] are pleased to announce that [FIRST NAME] [HOUSE NAME] has joined the ranks of High Society.
- When a character has completed an apprenticeship
[FIRST NAME] [HOUSE NAME] has completed an apprenticeship as <Squire/Ward/Lady-in-Waiting/ > to [CHARACTER NAME OF HOST]
Births
[Male Parent] and [Female Parent] are pleased to announce the birth of their baby <boy/girl> [BABY NAME] at the [ESTATE NAME]
though if a Bastard
[BABY NAME] was born to [Male Parent]
...and perhaps if Stupid, Deformity, Lisp or Lame trait
[BABY NAME] was born to [Male Parent] and [Female Parent]
Deaths - if possible, I think it would be nice to have something like;
House [HOUSE NAME] regret the passing of [TITLE(s) AT DEATH] [FIRST NAME] [ HOUSE NAME] at the Age of [AGE] <(of Natural Causes/by Trial of Arms/in combat/in suspect circumstance)> at/on board [ESTATE NAME/SHIP NAME where dies]
<Where no reason to think foul play (including if the family do not realise it was an assassination)/Personal Combat/Assasinated>
so Darius Shirazi would be
House Shirazi regret the passing to Baron Darius Shirazi at the age of 40(?) in suspect circumstance at Estate Shiraz
Coming of Age
Think this could be presented as something like;
House [HOUSE NAME] are pleased present [FIRST NAME] upon <his/her> coming of age!
and a couple of different lines
- When a character is made Major
House [HOUSE NAME] are pleased to announce that [FIRST NAME] [HOUSE NAME] has joined the ranks of High Society.
- When a character has completed an apprenticeship
[FIRST NAME] [HOUSE NAME] has completed an apprenticeship as <Squire/Ward/Lady-in-Waiting/ > to [CHARACTER NAME OF HOST]
Births
[Male Parent] and [Female Parent] are pleased to announce the birth of their baby <boy/girl> [BABY NAME] at the [ESTATE NAME]
though if a Bastard
[BABY NAME] was born to [Male Parent]
...and perhaps if Stupid, Deformity, Lisp or Lame trait
[BABY NAME] was born to [Male Parent] and [Female Parent]